Friday, February 23, 2018

Seeds Of Change Comments

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Just as raindrops moist the parched earth
And vegetation grows without dearth -

All we need is a compassionate heart,
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Bipasha Dutt
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Rajnish Manga 05 February 2019

Sweet and substantial. In a few words, the poem brings to fore the need for nurturing basic human values which, as a matter of fact, are the real 'Seeds Of Change' for the society or the world. Thanks for sharing it, Bipasha.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 February 2018

Hi Bipasha, I was just wondering how all on a sudden, you have become philosophical! ! ! But you draw the image from nature itself, to express the statement and enhance the intensity of the expression. Loved it! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 February 2018

A wonderful succinct write with great rhyme. Liked the last stanza. Beautiful lines well executed.

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Bipasha D 24 February 2018

Thank you Rose

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Nudershada Cabanes 23 February 2018

Beautiful poem Bipasha. For seeds of change to grow we need to change too.

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Bipasha D 23 February 2018

Thank you. Yes, I agree

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