Friday, September 16, 2011

Seedless Tree Comments

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The fruits you bear
Speak of your tree
And the quality sown
Sour with no juice
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Marvin Brato 18 October 2011

Indeed, life is unpredictable. All we need is to survive and move on! Well-penned!

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Terence George Craddock 17 September 2011

Yes life can be both a puzzle and a mystery. The difference between tragedy and comedy is of course a tragic ending or a happy ending, but other elements throughout can be one or the other or both. the ancient Greeks called this perception of reality tragi-comedy in their dramatic plays written as an insight into the mysteries of life. The mystery of the tree 'Your roots absorbed more/ Than it could use/ Your roots got suffocated' is of course the tree drowned. The roots absorbed so much water, the cells after being super saturated, expanded burst and died. All life is a balance.

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