Seed To A Latino Dancer (The Nurturing Of Young One In The Womb) Comments

Good good poem. What I liked most was how you tackled real life as eloquently as you did here. Giving birth is a beautiful thing. A blessing. A story of truimphant porportion

soon the cries embrace the smile..... wonderful i really enjoyed reading it especially this sentence :)

Magnificent creation portraying alongside the joy that a baby brings along like a blossoming of crops bring showers of joy to the farmers soul but it has come from the untiring labour in summer and rain of him...The meeting of two thoughts have kept the flow going in a thoughtfull adventure...And as the other poems of yours the innovations in design can never go unnoticed...

wow..its really a nice poem. Cheers! !

Good Composition....

young love has no fear that is what is so dear a dare that which is rare I don't care do it..do it now...Oh..little amy is so cute...so where is the fathere? who cares..did you hsve fun...yes...and would do it again...young love has no fear that is so dear...a dare which is rare...not to care...you said it all my dancer.....in any world...boy or girl...

well depicted piece of mother-child dilemma and triumph. and the title very unique. Congratulations :)

Childbirth always brings joy, which is captured in this poem.

i like the fact that you write about childbirth (that atleast is what i hope it is about) because it is a beautiful thing; life. although, pretty nasty and hard. good job (:

really loved it nice job dear :)) keep it up

Really nice poem.Good job

I love how thoughts are stitched together. Written elegantly tragic in a way as it's a reality some face.

Dear Juneja, in your 'Seed to a Latino dancer' You depicted a real picture when a new born appears. 'she relishes the enamoring pain' A mother relishes the agony for something to gain. Your entry is great, I wholeheartedly appreciate.

The dancer and her baby have to fight a fierce battle to survive.The last couplet is fantastic. A moving poem.

This terrific and well crafted write is very appealing to me because it brings me memories when my daughter Sarah was born: what an emotional moment that I can never forget! Your talent and emotions came alive through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

Good poem. Everything is fairy. congratulation I invite you to read my poems and comment. kindly keep contact. Yours Gajanan Mishra

I think the poem is terrific! Good job! S

It is such a blessing when a baby is born, the most happiest moments even in difficult times. Great poem

care is described with lot of care and like more evidently..! !

it must be mysterious one, it is not my place to judge, however, since we share one language, English, I would like to share something mutual among us. sometimes it goes well without any mutual things only when it comes to be understood as time goes by. I would have to say this is a piece something like that. Anyway, I like it you put such energy for whatever you write, I really admire that.