Seed N Suicide Comments

Wow. Great poem, great message, and I wonder if your writing about a man, a flower growing or both. Either way the metaphor is perfect, and right now I feel like the seed/man drowning because of all I've let go by.

That's really inspirational. I love how you stuck with the seed reference throughout. I sometimes feel like that, I hope I grow out of this like the guy in your poem.

This is great...I read your bio what do you mean you dnt write. You clearly do cause your really good. Keep it up.

SIMPLY STUNNING! ! ! Seriously, not enough superlatives for it. One of the best I've read. I love the way the poem suddenly switches, beautifully written. I am at the wanting to drown stage at the moment but this poem gives me hope.

thts very good. keep wirtung. and i will keep my part up.10

great poem.. no more word to be said..

Man, that was just awesome! ! ! I'm at a loss for words!

Beautiful poem that starts out in depression and progresses to become happy once again great poem :)

this write is more insightful and philosophical than it reads...the 'only seed that has't bloomed' was about to get drowned and lost but well soaked in its dark experiences of such a life still sprouted and bloomed...good... good imagery you create, Brianna...10