Thursday, November 6, 2014

See You! Comments

Rating: 5.0

See you in a short while
For its a call of time
For I am slave of time
I can never refuse its call.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2019

We always have temporary break and temporary separation still scribble mind. But in breath of life still we have hope to meet somewhere. Enjoying the bountiful scenery is definitely very nice. An excellent poem is nicely penned...10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 10 April 2015

Another beautiful poem - life with its beautiful stops, pauses and wayside entertainment till the final destination.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 January 2015

Nice lines...Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we are blessed with Enjoy the beauty of life....10 What makes me to wonder? And thrill under Such a nice spell Verbally I can’t express or tell There is magnetic pull That keeps me cheerful I read your creation And float under its recreation

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Unwritten Soul 14 December 2014

Beautiful write! again from you_Soul

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 07 December 2014

I love this prompt wish as sweet a prayer.

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Heather Wilkins 04 December 2014

I met you somewhere at some point in time so far it was a wonderful poetic journey traveled along with you with sweet and bitter rhymes in course of time beautiful thought

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 04 December 2014

No choice left for final stop.......A beautifully composed poem and meaningful of life it gives. likes it.

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Savita Tyagi 01 December 2014

Lovely composition! Enjoy your break! You will bring rhythm and beauty in whatever you are doing and wherever your journey is taking you. Loved your style.

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Lyn Paul 24 November 2014

So beautiful Geetha... I think of you often and certainly will do over the festive season. Thank you x

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Rajesh Thankappan 17 November 2014

The motion of the poem was that of hustling time. Nice composition.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2014

I am sure to knock in you door! See you in short while! Excellent composition. Each line makes feeling of suitable realization. Enjoying beauty, with Christmas songs and watching snow covered mountains really gives one brief account of nature. That is why it is necessary to see for a while to nature's beauty. Excellent poem shared.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 November 2014

See you in a short while For its a call of time thank you

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Tribhawan Kaul 14 November 2014

What a poetic way to say a temporary goodbye! Simply beautiful 10

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Ramesh Rai 13 November 2014

Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we are blessed with Enjoy the beauty of life Looking through the window of musical poems. See you in a short while from now!

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Amitava Sur 13 November 2014

A lovely poetic way to take a leave. Wish you enjoy your holidays in peace with some more poems being rich. Loved it Geetha.

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 November 2014

A sweet and lovely poem.......10

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 08 November 2014

I often play hide and seek I go on and off If I am breathing in I am sure to knock in you door! See you in short while! Excellent stanza. Very meaningful. The entire poem shines with fine touch of your thoughts. Very nicely penned.

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Alesia Leach 08 November 2014

A wonderfully penned poem about life's journey and time.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 November 2014

Phenomenal write with touching words indeed....Geetha......outstanding

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Saheb Mohapatra 07 November 2014

extraordinary poem with thoughts that i salute honestly........thanks

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