Saturday, April 26, 2008

See What Life Has Done! Comments

Rating: 2.2

I saw a young man dropped out of envy
His heart was stagnant and heavy
Many ways contradicted his
They searched for a way to see him in abyss
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Godspower Oshodin
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Chantel Shoats 18 November 2008

wonderful! i like this one alot! sorry took so long to write back! !

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Vallerie Lobell 29 April 2008

what an uplifting poem...I am very familiar with a stagnant and heavy heart...it is nice when bad turns to good...when I first saw the title I assumed it was the other way around...well done....Vallerie Lobell

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