Wednesday, April 30, 2008

See Through The Simple Things Comments

Rating: 4.7

we all start the same,
no lies,
no problems,
no hopes,
...
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Aden Orie
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Carrol Hoffman 12 May 2008

wow your such a great poet you have alot of talent

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Roland Bastien 05 May 2008

well done Aden. You are a true poet

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Roland Bastien 05 May 2008

well done Aden. You are a true poet

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Rebecca Howard 04 May 2008

we are just human remember that to error is our way we dont mean to but it happens every single day yes when we start out we are alway pure but that is dull without a doubt we will always lie for sure. love the poem. Rebecca

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 May 2008

Sometime a lie acts to save a critical situation-its other name is diplomacy.

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