See This Dawn Comments

Each waking dawn, life is renewed in a special way thru colors of lovely rays and song. Beautiful words and images, you paint the dawn so well. But the 'super painter' is more clever still, knowing how thru color and light arouse his creatures for a full participation in life's dawn, every morn. I like the vision of the super creator very much, it reminds me of Michelangelo's painting in the Sistine Chapel of God giving Adam his breath of life. You're beautiful poem incites waking up to a beautifully colored dawn. A well merited 10

Like birds at dawn we search purpose- - - - - - that is a jewel of a line! ! ! ! It is so exhilarating to write a perfect line, isn't it? ? ! ! ! I wholeheartedly agree with the message of this poem- -we really must endeavor to open our eyes and our souls to the glory of the world we live in! 10

Like birds at dawn we search purpose Like rays we like to light life ever This is very interesting to listen Mind revives in faith of God, you see. So beautiful.

Communication with one's God. Sometimes the creation of a poem seems like that. And the Dawn image emphasizes the renewal of Faith and restores our senses. It is a very fine poem and I shall add it to my favourites' list, Kumarmani.

search the purpose of your existence awakening dear poet, live wisely fantastic message perfect 10

Outstanding Poem....so refreshing and meaningful.....We definitely look for the purpose in life each and everyday by fine tuning our wishes....and our life gets enlightened by the sunrays everyday....and our mind, as you rightly said enchants the faith of Almighty......Deep and profound poem...100+++

Entirely lovely! ! Nice piece of work.