Saturday, October 3, 2009

See This Boy Comments

Rating: 2.4

This boy says he is a king,
and he can be all he can be,
he lives life like royalty,
and love being who he be............
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Mahfooz Ali
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Wahab Abdul 04 November 2013

very fine.. i liked it... keep going...

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Devendra Barve 16 April 2013

I love your poem sir....what a great writer you are.

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Abhishek Tiwari 09 October 2011

Neither money nor power makes you the king..its your mind that'll make it.. And so you are the Nawab of lucknow..

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Sam Varghis 11 September 2011

Wonderful. Because man is living in his mind not in the real world. I will read more of yours. I request you to read and comment on my poem, 'The Innocent Village Girl'. Thanks

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Anjali Sinha 03 October 2009

wow ali lovely poem yeh ill say like manjusha 'see this boy' dont change we all like you as you are yeh your the best -10 anjali

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Kavya Manjusha 03 October 2009

This boy...not a king, this boy...not a perfect, this boy...has a dream, this boy is me and he the best, no matter, what the world see.... Yaa this is YOU! ! ! and do not change it no matter what happens.. YOU ARE THE BEST! ! ! The poem is coming straight from your heart...this is the reason I am simply flattered...I loved the soul of the poem.... May the Almighty be with you...Always...

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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