Wednesday, December 31, 2008

See The Truth Comments

Rating: 4.8

no more being a user and feeling like a loser in life
i might step up in the light
but my minds on a different path tonight
words are out of sight
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keith hendrickson
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Elena Winters 17 September 2009

all i gotta is DAM! ! ! ! you did a very good job this piece was more then poetic outstanding i should say...... i know exactly how you feels about trust but you see trust is something a lot of people don't take seriously unlike us.... love your poem updat me on new poetry whenever you can

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Winnie Angel 10 September 2009

ya have written very subtly and with frankness...deep emotional turmoil...winnie

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Melissa Medrano 04 August 2009

I love your style :) :)

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Jacky Dorantes 14 July 2009

You did an awesome job in showing how disconnected one can feel from our body. I mean that how sometimes our body is present, but our mind is somewhere else. The only thing that I would reccomend is to try and finish it off. I mean, I love the direction you were headed in, you kept getting deeper and I loved it. But I sort of feel like you kinda left it hanging. I'm only trying to give you constructive criticism, please don't take it the wrong way. I love the way you write. Once again, love your style.

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Crystle Jones 08 July 2009

exactlly what i said before. you are truely amazing. i relate to every one of your pieces. specially this one! ! ! !

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amazing wrote poem keep up the worko

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Krystal Vincent 07 July 2009

This is a well writen peice I loved it. I understand what its like to to not trust anyone even my own family.I have been in foster care since i was three years old. Its hard to trust people that dont follow through and dont show they care. U will sooner later overcome that fear and start trusting people. u are amazing writer. Uve got potential and can do anything u set ur mind to. U have just got to believe in urself. Uve got to start out small and work urself to the top. ur truely krystal

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sky dreams 21 June 2009

this poem is just awesome.. i dont even know what to say! =) 10++

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Luwi Habte 06 April 2009

cute...well done keith

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 21 January 2009

wow a work of art! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Octavia Wilson 15 January 2009

Great job. we have a lot in common

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Nikia Chesney 12 January 2009

Very well written, I love the climax aspect to the piece.

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Beautifully Unknown 12 January 2009

this is beautiful! I love the way it all just flows together!

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. . 12 January 2009

You can really feel the poem build up in its intensity and its yearning for answers. I also love the flow and wonderful imagery to bring to connect your audience.

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Chitra - 09 January 2009

a very thoughtful theme with a good flow to the verse

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Alice Preece 09 January 2009

Beautiful poem. I loved the ending!

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Andriana Londono 09 January 2009

luv this poem..well written<33

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Elysia Palmer 07 January 2009

pure true and full of feelings i do really love everything u have written. its not just entertainment its mind altering for anyone who can understand what ur really writing. i believe im one of those people. i feel like a deeper people for having read ur work. thank you for sharing ur gift with everyone who wants to enjoy it. dont ever stop im totally serious

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Asia Joseph 05 January 2009

Really good........ great use of words felt the emotions did no want it to stop very smooth writing! Asia Jay

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angel unknown 04 January 2009

really good as the last one i have read.10

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