Tuesday, August 27, 2013

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Have you ever just stopped and stared
Looked and remembered why you cared
Have you just looked up and smile
Across the expanse, across ever mile
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Aric Beers
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 29 August 2013

this is a nice piece with all its rhyme and rhythm and it reminds us to halt for a while and appreciate beauty and be with ourselves

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 August 2013

excellent write, Aric.

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Jayne Davies 27 August 2013

Great poem! Well done!

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