Friday, October 23, 2020

See The Dawn's Light Tremble Anew Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aislinn's ashes linger in my every breath
clogging my lungs with tears
molten lava enters my heart and stops.
Aislinn's ashes linger in my bloodstream
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Mark Heathcote
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2020

Aislinn's ashes linger and every breath clog in lung in tear. Chest heaves to expand to lift to fall. You gaze into her eyes. Dawn's light is powerfully perceived and scenic beauty with lovable mind is explored. This poem is very interestingly penned..5 stars..

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