See Me Beneath My Navals Comments

All the parity is kept.... See me underneath my navals Obviously, under my feet Paradise is put, sad poem.... but wonderful expressions and you are very original in potrayin the inner struggle.

Under my feet paradise is put.A lovely poem with magnetic touch.Thanks for sharing

This is a well penned poem. Thanks for sharing Poetess.

A well penned sad poem. Tahnsk for sharing Poetess...

A beautiful poem indeed. sad but real. Feel the pangs in each line. Thanks for sharing.10+++