Sunday, October 28, 2018

See Me. Comments

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I put on a brave face
but I'm losing my place.
I'm so tired of lying.
Would you feel diff'rently
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Carl Roussell
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Aqua Flower 29 October 2018

This is very intriguing write and heartfelt. You could feel the agony in the words. Sometimes we don't want to reveal our true selves in fear of rejection. A very good friend of mine once said to me There is a difference between bad and evil. Bad is just an opinion. :)

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Carl Roussell 29 October 2018

Thank you for the comment. That fear of rejection can keep some people alone - I personally feel that friendship is worth the risk.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2018

Carl, such a lovely write...................

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Carl Roussell 29 October 2018

Hi Bernard, thanks for the reading and I am happy you like the poem.

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Carl Roussell

Trenton, Ontario
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