See, If You Can...... Comments

Wow, impressively deep. See, if you can really see The depths of your dreams Have growing forests of poison-besmeared eyes In place of a throbbing heart and scarily real. Thank you Naseer for sharing your talent with us :)

i felt the peom and i lived the story because of your way at the presentation. Its beautiful poem though.

see... if you can see the beauty of every comments...it reflects the contents of this poem..naizz

got a feeling of doubt of what everything exist...are all things be used... according to what we want.....so true and real in the time of wanting is nothing to knowing all the things...very beautiful poem..thank you Go bless

Great one Naseer saheb 'The path leading to Macedonia...... ' thanks for sharing 10+

Nothing is sacred anymore...

History and culture being changed, being forgotten. East being devoured by Western desires...

Amazing poetry. Thanks for sharing.