Friday, January 2, 2015

See Him In The Cute Butterflies Comments

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God! Oh God! Where are you?
Here are you, or there are you?
I'm sure anyway somewhere are You,
The question but remains as to where are you?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Sarmad Mirza 07 January 2015

Children are beautiful like the butterflies! They make everyone happy with their innocence and vivaciousness! A sweet write on children! (Report)

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Salini Nair 05 January 2015

innocenCe is the GOD.....great work

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Savita Tyagi 04 January 2015

Children are the beauty of world. Whatever pain and gloom we gather in our sufferings disappears in their innocent mutterings. Thanks for sharing Akhtarji. Wish you a very happy new year with more of your wonderful poems.

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Valsa George 04 January 2015

Children are beautiful like the butterflies! They make everyone happy with their innocence and vivaciousness! A sweet write on children!

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Hazel Durham 03 January 2015

Children are the beauty in this world they are so pure with trusting eyes they put their faith in us to show them all the good things in life! Stunning write!

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Bisma Mirza 03 January 2015

Very Sweet...... :) Brilliant poem! ! ! ! ..10 on 10

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Bisma Mirza 03 January 2015

wow..... Brilliant! ........10 on 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 January 2015

Amazing and beautiful.......................10

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Khalid Saifullah 03 January 2015

It's simply beautiful................10

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