Monday, March 10, 2014

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Rating: 2.5

Look around.
Do you see that place there?
What do you feel when you see it?
Is it just a plain old place,
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Jessica Dehn
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Marcondes P 27 June 2016

With our repetitive life, We unlearnt to see from differente angles the world around us. And it is very important to our quality of life, cause the world always changes together with us.

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Jessica Dehn 13 March 2014

Thank you both! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It never fails to amaze me how blind we as people can be to the power and wonder of a simple place or go with out see a person and the wonder each holds.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 March 2014

Sometimes we look at things but do not really see things. Your these two lines reminded me of just that: 'How rare a thing to see. Not just to look, but see.' - And...the last stanza, 'So for now I will sit under this tree, hoping to see the truth that it sees! To uncover my eyes and remove the film that covers them. I will look and see! ' - Is just beautiful....

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