Wednesday, November 28, 2018

Seductress Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seductress

I'm a seductress
I suck you like a vacuum
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Jackie Chou
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Sandra Feldman 07 February 2021

Some will be dying to meet you. Even if you wrote this just for fun. Great work, done.

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Sandra Feldman 07 February 2021

Some will dying to meet you, Seductively and very well written, even if just for fun

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Denis Mair 05 May 2020

Sexy! I'm under her spell, so I want to stay awhile and watch her dance.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2020

I'm a seductress I will make you perpetually wait never ceasing to fascinate. desires covered up in the form of humor.. liked your poem very much. tony

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Chinedu Dike 30 January 2020

A poignant bit of verse nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with insight. An expertly worded portrayal of an elusive enchantress. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Rajnish Manga 28 November 2018

I'm a seductress / I will not come / to your door If I do I will lose / my allure.... //.... Amazing poem with the utmost sensuous appeal. Thanks.

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