Seductive Poetry Comments

I've used my verse to seduce a heart; at least I want you. Can I rhyme you into bed? reaally i like your poems.. it takes me to heights of joy and mirth, . dev

'Cino knew, 'Lips, words, ' and they might be led. ' I love you' works on women, subtly we're told: I want you. Can I rhyme you into bed? ' these days you need more than rhymes actuallly...realy nice poem mam..enjoyed it very much..thanks 10++

What a delightful and very well written poem this is, Lillian! You have tackled a sensitive subject head on and done a wonderful job with this charming and entertaining poem! You are quite right that many men recoil at loving words expressed in poetry, or even orally in rhyme. Kind of makes them nervous! But one day, there will be one with a sensitive heart and you will find that lover/friend your heart has sought. Thank you for this exceptional and very appealing poem. Carl.