Sunday, January 10, 2010

Seductive Delight Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first taste of warmth as lips clasp and kiss,
Softly held in his solo covet bliss,
I cede to the wild passion that persist;
Loose count as each moment beats to coexist.
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Jai K Garg
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 February 2010

Nice seduction with a but … In Divinity as you write: ‘Raw yearnings stay for our divine pleasure; As love raptures feast in the leisure. ‘ In lower case you’ve written divinity [gracious god] had it been in uppercase [Divinity] nothing ‘raw’ ‘rapture’ exists what exists Pure Rapture [not a sermon misunderstand me not] else are all rupture and…well readers know well… Enjoyed it with 10… Ms. Nivedita UK PS All these are written for the word divinity [in lower case of yours] still divinity imbibes a separate feeling and connotation to me..if in lower case...even...

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