Seduction Comments

Wow... Like this poem!

I see humor- -not some epic brainiac tour of philosophy and sociology. Some times a light touch can make a simple point- -like maybe Don't Forget to Enjoy Life.

Sensual and beautiful but confused where it is taking me. Written nicely.

Walk in this house.... thanks for posting....

Sex has pretty much been an integral part of every revolution and revolutionary throughout the history of mankind. How can the narrator of this poem imagine enacting such come-on and facing rejection by the subject of her fantasy? It's kind of far-fetched and I'm left pondering what the message is that she's trying to express in this poem. Is this meant to be a meditation on failure? Hers? The revolution? What? I don't get it.

Playful seduction made real by taking dashiki off. Quite a thrill.

a lovely sensual poem of distractions? ...........well written.

One day! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nice poem, with sensuous lines