it did not escape me
those sideway glances
as you stood in that corner
i pretended to ignore
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It moved me... The effect is intense from the words! Good job
we stared head on a stranger to another....................... heart rejoices by new born love like crescent moon fluxes to fulmination, quite passionate write, heart provoking, thanks for sharing
Wow! A very moving and thought provoking write! The mystery of love manifested clearly in another part of the world! Things happen for a reason and only time can tell the final results! Amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC
Very romantic poem. The magnetic attraction occasioned by vain glorification of beauty, well depicted in the poem. An elegantly written piece of poetry, well articulated with insight. Lovely indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.