Sunday, September 27, 2009

Sediment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Adjusted to named
enlisted
forced to play
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Philip Winchester 12 October 2009

Clever, Clever Clever writing, Heart and Mind Guiding, to wash clean the Brain and Start Anew.Like a train waiting at the station, all aboard, whistle blown, motion gradual, clickerty clack, clickerty clack away we Go. We when you arrive at the next station jump off and leave your baggage behind.You will be now with your 'Friends' Alive and Oh so Pure..........+10 out of 10......... See you again Soon. Kind Regards Phil

0 0 Reply
Yisriella Pautz 11 October 2009

Beautiful, and concise. Simplistic form and total inspiration! 10

0 0 Reply
Spiritwind Wood 09 October 2009

you truelly have a fan..your writing is excellant..most of it short, but you capture every moment in it

0 0 Reply
Raymond Rivera 07 October 2009

This is great. Guys don't want to play games...we're just more vulnerable than you might imagine.. Very great write,10

0 0 Reply
Anthony Feghaly 05 October 2009

very impressed its very well done

0 0 Reply
Theodora Onken 03 October 2009

Just had to comment. Wow...that is all i am capable of saying at this moment...oh, maybe, brillant! Theo

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success