~ Sedation Of Salvation ~ Comments

Extremely joyous to read this poem Reminds me R.N.Tagore's [RNT] wrote., '...let attachment be gate way to salvation...' Poet made some translation of RNT...may be in subconscious this clicked to write this poem Philosophical outfit made this poem splendorous Indeed a classy Regards

Dispassionate Karma [DP] and Passionate Karma [PK]...very aptly poemed...giving 'upper-hand' to PK....accepting all hurdles and loads...bravo.... DP is also a path of Karma Yoga...where I [read ego] is muffled or vestiged... Seers / Sages advocate DP....here Poet in favor of PK Excellent poem... opening avenue for thinking ten+++

Fascinating write, you have spelled out many thoughts of looking at Karma which opened my eyes. I love your flow and style and really most of you works make one think. Great write.

when the mind is busy with the I, how can eye see the reality

I trully like your style, very well expression of emotions...great job

Your word using abilities are unflappable, eclipsed only by your punctuality in timing. This poem is like a rope into the sky.

Deep intellectual thoughts garnished with wonderful choice of words. Just loved it. Kudos!

Lord Krishna says in Bhagwad Gita that one should do his duty leaving the fruits of labour in the Lord's hands. This is one kind of unattached karmic action which leads to salvation ultimately. You have rightly brought this effect in your poem.

Very intriguing. It certainly sticks out from other poems I've read. Very deep and philosophical. I like it.

Accelerate my momentum Swell like snow ball To savor passionate karmic Flip-fab side of life! ...The intriguing thing I find about reading a John Grisham is his opening lines... I find myself reciting this opening stanza over and over again. Cant get over it. The flexibility in the structure of the stanza and its rhythmic flow really opens it up for one to enjoy. It puts me so close to my beliefs and leaves me living on the flip-fab side of life. Well done 10/10

A very philosophical view and a deep insight

I love the latin definition.

You have presented unconventionally a deep philosophy. It's a very intriguing poem that in the end reveals how in isolation the self is delivered by none other than self itself. Excellent!

Excellent work Nivedita. The philosophic subject is very beautifully narrated with a different style.

A very unusual way of writing. But beautifully written. Well penned. Thanks for sharing with me 10++

Karma is heard to understand, especially for someone that questions and intellectualizes everything. It must be a great benefit to a person that excepts theories of religious or spiritual nature, it must bring on calmness and a relaxed state of mind - sedation, that Leeds to salvation...........lovely poem....10

Your just a poem have given lot to learn....... Great write....... Really a very different way of writing...... So much in flow... Want to say just loved it..... Take care.

though my small intellect does not understand all of karma and the like. I love this poem, it is built fromt the ground up and flows so well I just love it. congrats ms nivedita

Hello Nivedita! Now this is a very free-flowing poem with some excellent skip along rhyme that makes it very accessible to all readers despite it quite a diverse setting and karmic soul. I love the elated and vibrant flow of words that make this so catchy! The thought behind it all is your spirit driven purpose and the flow of life and how we could be free if we let our hearts to be! The salvation for me is to participate, to get involved and to interact with other people or other things in this world... not to be dispondant from it, even if the world is negative and force you to be reclused. Excellent thought and happy go lucky poem, love the aura it generates. Well written indeed. Good for you Niv, keep up the good writing! Dale :)

'Sedation Of Salvation' I've read several times.My comment is short, Since I do not have a 'Theology or Ideaology' I just live my life moment to moment with an understanding of life's cycle. I love this stanza: Divergence my property Karmic liberty Accept all Flop lollipop fop hip hop You gather events, ideas, et al and make magnifcent poems. Thanks for sharing.