Saturday, July 20, 2013

Secrets To Reveal (To You) Comments

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Do you know
Let me tell you a secret
You were the first one I had thought was true
Atleast I saw you different.
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Ala' Elouri
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Ala' Elouri 21 July 2013

@ C.P.: I agree in your point of view but in this poem I meant the one who left me is the one who lost me. @Vijay: Thank you. All of my poems are written out of my heart.

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Vijay Sai R 20 July 2013

its a beautiful poems, full of emotions

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C. P. Sharma 20 July 2013

Life is not to win or lose It lies in how much we In oneness fuse

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