Saturday, January 5, 2013

Secrets Mocking Me! Comments

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Shutter in despair
Crying tears down your face
Stuff you just can't bare
No way I can start this race.
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Dawn Lambert
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Babatunde Aremu 06 January 2013

Good poem on a rare topic. I lke it. Keep writing

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Sandy Player 05 January 2013

knowledge without wisdom is a dangerous thing for sure. my maths teacher told me knowledge is knowing a tomato is a fruit. wisdom is knowing not to put it in the fruit bowl. really foreboding poem, knowledge really is like a disease; and in its worse state its gossip. i like that you made nouns out of verbs, gives it a degree of personality; a dark mocking personality yes. intriguing write, dont keep it secret! -M

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