Our secrets have torn us apart
Why did we ever start?
We had our rough beginnings
Hiding what we kept inside
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Sir , Namaskar . Bhala Lagila , ama samastanku , ama Ghare .
I liked the rhyme, but I think there may be a grammatical mistake...in the 5th line, did you mean ' Afraid to see each other deep inside'? Otherwise I think it's a good poem
Sir , Namaskar .