Friday, September 12, 2008

Secrets Comments

Rating: 5.0

As we sit in this supposed silence
Sipping on secrets that are never said,
I wake, flutter eyelids, flex muscles,
And silently lift my head,
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Mathew Lewis
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Viola Grey 13 September 2008

this piece has many great lines...this one stands out...'I sip on my secret and cherish it, I let its heady mix conquer my brain.'....great work

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