Tuesday, January 15, 2008

Secrets Comments

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I have been so many things in my life
A daughter, a worker, a beloved and a wife
I have sometimes sat down and wept
But that is a secret that should be timidly kept
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Rani Turton
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Ranjit Ravindran 10 October 2009

Supreme Revelation Ma'am. 'Insecurity, confusion, fatigue and while I hid all this inside me behind a smile'......My mom does that every time. Women poets are really a great boon for me...helps me have a better insight into their seemingly cryptic nature. Thank you for sharing.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 12 May 2008

profound life poem thanks for sharing

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Rangarajan Kazhiyur Mannar 19 February 2008

A wonderful poem, Rani. I am awestruck by your lines ' can choose to dropp out of the race' Or choose to go on at my pace'. Very true, there can't be a third choice. This one is promptng me to go thro all your poems.

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You wonderfully put down what it means to be a woman. So often defined by our roles, so often pushed when we need to walk at our own pace. Thank you for these lovely words, I enjoyed them and I look forward to reading more of your work over time. Peace, L&T

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Shiza Khan 21 January 2008

it's juss wonderful...u have so rightly put down the condition of a woman in these words...best wishes :)

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Broken Peaces 16 January 2008

Go on at your pace you will reach the corner and who knows whats around there 10 Chris

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Angel Ofdarkness 15 January 2008

Nice wording and great rhyme scheme. Best Wishez, Angel Of Darkness

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Elizabeth T. 15 January 2008

Beautiful poem. You nicely expressed your feelings. Good job!

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