Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Secrets Comments

Rating: 3.8

Shadows cast upon the wall,
Dark whispers in the hall,
Broken glass that cuts you deep,
Dangerous secrets you must keep.
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Star Crossed Lady
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Rajendran Muthiah 05 September 2012

Rhyming lines. Till the end, carry the reader forward. Suddenly you give the theme and make it open. Wonderful. Rated *****

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