Secrets Comments

This made me smile at the end, i was reading along thinking lovely another great and original poem of romance unbeknown to the inevitable suprize that awaited :) cool write.

the secret when unveiled the code when deciphered love seems to blaze by the flames of desire yet the passion overwhelmes in its room..................dazzling piece, i like it,10/10, thanks for sharing

Dee, Brittany Spears seems to have found the answer!

Clever, funny, but also an interesting insight into human nature! Very well written to boot! ! Excellent stuff Dee. jim xx

Dee this is one of those pieces that intrigue (like an Agatha Christie story) . Beautifully lead in and such a clever twist. And what a profound statement about the ego of the male hairdresser. Darling... How could you? love it. Allie xxxx

Dee, absolutely fabulous twist! You got everybody going.... one well-written witty ppiece BUT SO TRUE! ! ! ! ! t x

This is wonderful the way you wind your innocence and joy together in the last line. Fabulous work Dee with your usual sense of life and humour. Cheers, Dawn

By the way sometimes I'm not to observant.....congrats on your 100th! ! !

Dee, you had me there for a second but I knew there had to be a twist, perfect twist and so very true! ! Wonderful write! Hugs, Diane

I love your poem. I have had the same woman cutting my hair for over thirty years. My wife thinks she is in love with me.....otherwise why would I trust her with those shears.

And here I was about to turn you over and give you a good talking to about how the moral fiber factor.........................and ya go an' mention the hairdresser, Geuss that makes a big diff, , , , now all I has ta say is Great write Lady.........

Dee, I love this one, it is very clever! ! I too have a hairdresser who I worship and wouldn't dare to offend..... you really had us on the hoof there though! Great writing! HG: -) xx

The ickle fickle finger of fate Will pay you back for sure Your crowning glory May now look rather Whory Thou must not upset thy coiffeur!

Dear Dee, you had me worried there, you certainly built up suspense and gripped me with inqisitiveness that makes me feel almost guilty to admit! Well written is my verdict!