Sunday, May 20, 2018

Secrets Comments

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Secrets held
From all who tell
Dropping them
In a wishing well
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White Tiger
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Aqua Flower 24 May 2018

Once a secret is told, it's not a secret anymore. There is a nice rhythm to the poem.

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A lovely poem. Liked the third stanza, ''I will keep my secrets and continue my way.'' Well crafted write.

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