Thursday, May 18, 2017

Secrets Comments

Rating: 4.5

Like an anklet
Hidden yet known by its sound,
We whisper into ears
Secrets locked in the treasure trove of heart.
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Payal Priya
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 May 2017

A very clever write. Thanks.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 May 2017

Short and sweet poem and yet the secret is revealed. Loved reading it.

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Unwritten Soul 21 May 2017

The silly smiles reveal all..thats make me smile because i can imagine how cute it is :)

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Payal Priya 05 June 2017

Thank you for the lovely comment☺

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 May 2017

We whisper into ears Secrets locked in the treasure trove of heart. eyes, heart, secret smile, , , , , , , , reveals everything.... very nice expression dear poetess. tony

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Payal Priya 05 June 2017

Thank you sir for your lovely comment.

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