Secrets Comments

Linda, Are you supposed to tell people things like that? How do you expect to keep your feminine mystique ?

A heartbreaking scenario! Encapsulated in poetry that matches the delicate passion of a secret love. Top notch writing as ever. jim xx

Beautiful.... the secrets that a woman holds within her gentle heart, if only they could see.

tender thoughts expressed with sincerity...

Good and expressive poem. So beautifully complimented by the caption. Keep it up... Thank u. N.D.

A truly beautiful poem, written with great tenderness.

Superb, a wonderful meter, lovely repetition of 'I wonder if you know' which gives the piece some unity. You sum the mystery of love up very well, the moment where you wonder if the object of your live has any inklings. One thing I'd try is to write this with a triple rhyme and then have 'I wonder if you know', it may give it a nice floaty quality. It's great as it is though