Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Secrets Comments

Rating: 5.0

Keep them safely, guard like gold
All those secrets never told -
Secrets whispered long ago
Only you and I can know.
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Valerie Dohren
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Terry M 05 February 2014

Very well done, nice to know someone can keep a secret lol. I hope you are doing well, best wishes to ya kiddo and keep up the good work!

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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

Wonderful pen to trust and confidence... touché to you dear poet... and to your honor and resolve I tip my hat and graciously bow.

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Brian Johnston 31 January 2014

To me the heart of keeping a secret is honoring the heart, the identity of the teller, and not so much the subject matter which might well serve mankind. Surely all of our secrets if shared with others in a protected fashion (just because they contain sensitive material) are food for thought for all mankind, showing us as they do how all of our feelings bind us together in one humanity. Very nice poem though. I'll be coming back for more. You may just have inspired a new poem in my mind. So thanks for that too!

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 26 January 2014

Each who spoke them trusted me/ Not to ever set them free - It appears that to let loose those secrets is an immoral betrayal trust. So, according to this great poet, one has to Keep them safely, guard like gold/ All those secrets ever told -(told to us) A personifying instruction to the soul and conscience, a witty control to garrulous tongues. Great couplets here, Ma. ...Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle (Nigeria)

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Marvin Brato 25 January 2014

Interesting sentiments, and nice rhyme too!

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Dave Walker 24 January 2014

To trust another with our secrets is showing how much They really mean to us. A great poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2014

Secrets are deposits in a bank must be held safe. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Hans Vr 23 January 2014

A friend we can trust a secret to is among the most wonderful gifts of life

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Dinesan Madathil 23 January 2014

.Secrets cherished become so precious that the integrity of our past merging with present will look very sweet an entity to brood over. Your memories and bonds are sweetly real and they will have a long stay, be assured, Val.

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Sandra Feldman 22 January 2014

It's no Secret to us all, That you're poems do enthrall! Val, We all love you and them.

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Om Chawla 22 January 2014

They who told them now are gone Though their memory lingers on. Of these tales I'll never speak Even though my tongue is weak.' Very well written, Val.

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Lyn Paul 22 January 2014

Such beautiful words Valerie. But how we all already know your trustworthy heart, purely from your gentle words and your kindness. Thank you and I am sure that every one of us would trust you with our hearts.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 January 2014

everyday secret, love, good one.

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