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This is so beautifully well-written, and it really draws the reader in. Nice job, I gave it a 10!

Breath taking! I loved it, you really put detail into this and had the reader see it, I applaud you Keep writing! Cheers :)

well written! ! ! a 10 for you! !

Absolutely gorgeous... i liked how when you mentioned the leaves are fallen, i visioned that you and your lady felt risen... beautiful...tyvm

green resonates to grow by warmth darkness melts by the rise of sun heart meanders to see path of light yet quest of knowing n beautiful write m thanks for sharin

So peaceful picture of reciprocity! No question of doubt, debate.Nice Shouvik. .

Shouvik, I am speechless, all I can feel and see is heaven door opening in a midst of everyday emotions only the depth of love is felt so deep it becomes that heaven and in this poem I see it swimming in the ocean of love where everything does not matter, everything just disappears. What I love about your writing is the depth and how it takes us on a journey. Beautiful! ! ! ! Love and Light.

Ok this poem is one of my favs of yours, I can really feel the emotion in this piece. You are an awesome writer for your age. I love it! ! ! :)

Brilliant and beautiful.

Wow such a beautiful poem, so full of emotion and feeling. I can clearly feel the love of the character. An amazing poem :) Tiana xx

Brilliant still. It's a unique way to say a common thing. Keep it up.