Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Secrets Comments

Rating: 3.7

My life is a dream gone bad
Wishing for a wish, but a wish i never had
Until i met the girl
Who was meant to rock my world
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Jacob Guinn
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Melecia Williams 30 May 2012

This Poem Is Great, I've Read A Lot Of Crappy Boring Poems On Here, But This Paints A Mesmerising Picture. My Favorite Part Is: Wishing For A Wish, But I Wish I Never Had I Can Relate To Like All Your Poems Bro. Kudos To You.

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Sajna Kailas 30 May 2012

wow, very lovely poem with a lot of emotions. you were wonderfully pictured the sincere desires. Loved it! ! ! !

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Jacob Guinn

Jacob Guinn

San Ramon, California
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