Friday, July 15, 2011
Secrets Comments
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I take these pills, I drink, I smoke
I spew my food, I puke, I choke
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8/1/2025 7:36:24 PM # 1.0.0
If the world knows then no secret, I guess. Wondered about changing part of the last line. 'This' refers to a choice of two topics, not the choice of one poem. And the shame might, in my opinion, change to gain. Also 'This' becomes ' there.' In summary there is no gain. best wishes