Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Secretly Wishing Comments

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When you hold my hand
Out of fear or ecstasy
I ‘am secretly wishing a thousand dreams
To come true
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Guinevere Eveleigh
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And a fine job you have done here in enabling your Readers to get a grasp on such a situation...Your employment of crisp, spine construction affords the Reader an eye-pleasing read...Structure is crucial in architecting prose or poetry...your structural movement is tight & mellifluous...~FjR~

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