Thursday, July 9, 2015

Secretly Loving You Comments

Rating: 4.8

Just let me sit here,
Stare at you from somewhere,
Let my heart beat without a care,
With all the love that I can't share.
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Ellonah Varela
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Chinedu Dike 01 August 2015

A beautiful depiction of a secret love that is not noticed and reciprocated. It's a pity for one to be in such situation especially when one couldn't help feeling that way. Well, love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly, and one does not consciously choose whom to fall for. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Pregnant with a passion captivates in a creative and compelling way!

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Allotey Abossey 09 July 2015

Love's no love that's hidden... We've got to express it. You write well my friend

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