Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Secretly Living Toy Comments

Rating: ★4.5

What was once filled with joy
Is now only a broken toy
Cracked by fears
Broken by tears
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Cleo Blue
broken forgotten Goodbye
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David Beckham 02 January 2013

the opening stanza is gripping. The pace to it is relentless and you churned out words that evoke the right emotions. This speed in the opening stanza without control will be silly. But you showed great composure and tenacity to convey your thoughts expertly. In the opening stanza.10/10

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Hans Vr 26 December 2012

niice write

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