Saturday, April 22, 2006

Secretly Humming A Little Love Song Comments

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She smiled, sitting at the counter in Mike’s restaurant,
pulled out her false teeth,
then polished the uppers with a napkin.
For the lowers she removed a toothbrush
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Poetry Hound 22 April 2006

Terrific David Lynch-type dialogue. It's believable but just barely - cleaning dentures in public? I assume the typos are intentional, e.g. trill instead of thrill, women instead of woman,

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