Secret Tryst Comments

Good.Sometimes it may be.A couple of weeks is just few days.U should try to stand this.

Good! Sometimes, it may be.a couple of weeks is just few days.Try to stand this.

You’ve captured the essence of human relations. Which path will it take? One never knows.

very relatable. I'm a fan

ah, I was reading, and enjoying the woonderful words of love, then the change in tone... you're losing her! No! Don't let that happen... send page after page on your words of love, Knock her off her feet with words of love and passion, letting her know, you'll never let her go. Wonderful write Felipe! Wonderful! ; -) -Kelly.

When Hello fading dont you down, as it not replaced with Bye....If the Hello is fading it's you to make it bolder now...Underneath the quietness there must be a silent voice whispering from heart if we can listened, so good luck to u to free your miserable mind to fly high_Unwritten Soul

I can tell you loved this person very much. The hi's and hellos were what you needed to hear every day. the words spoke to you in a way no one but you can understand. The imagry in this poem, its so clear to see. I can picture holding my phone wainting for a hello that never seems to come. Please wright more, and please let me read them. I love your poetry so far. So keep adding to the list. :)