*secret Tomb* Comments

Great imagery, well written, I enjoyed, Loyd

Great write. Thought provoking. I especially like the following: nightmare replaying/ within the darkness/ as time crawls by

Great write. Thought provoking. I especially like the following: nightmare replaying/ within the darkness/ as time crawls by

Capturing the soul. Great write. Thought provoking.

Kind of eerie sounding. Our souls are free and leave our bodies once we die our earthly deaths. Interesting aspect though. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

soul can't be tied down. it's always free...i liked the way you evoked the emotion...

Reminded me of mummies