Saturday, September 19, 2009

*secret Tomb* Comments

Rating: 4.0

hidden
behind a mask
tatter cloth
ripped and torn
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Scarlet .....
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Great imagery, well written, I enjoyed, Loyd

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R.benjamin Abate 19 March 2014

Great write. Thought provoking. I especially like the following: nightmare replaying/ within the darkness/ as time crawls by

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R.benjamin Abate 19 March 2014

Great write. Thought provoking. I especially like the following: nightmare replaying/ within the darkness/ as time crawls by

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R.benjamin Abate 19 March 2014

Capturing the soul. Great write. Thought provoking.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2013

Kind of eerie sounding. Our souls are free and leave our bodies once we die our earthly deaths. Interesting aspect though. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Indira Babbellapati 19 September 2009

soul can't be tied down. it's always free...i liked the way you evoked the emotion...

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Joseph Poewhit 19 September 2009

Reminded me of mummies

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