Friday, December 1, 2006

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Every night and day, I dream of you
Hoping someday you will like me too.
Whatever i do
You are running in my mind
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Angeli Amparo
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Bill Scarbrough 01 December 2006

Try 'you're' in line 6 instead of 'your'.

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