Sunday, November 25, 2012

Secret Sins Of My Father Comments

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Alone you crept
and
Alone I wept
Oh Father,
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Karoliena Somura
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Yours Forever X 20 January 2013

I'm so sorry that you had to endure that. you're not alone with this, the same happened to me! if you ever want to talk i am here. great write, it made me cry xxx

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Sarah Mohyla 08 December 2012

I love this poem. It almost made me cry when i read it.

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Lyn Paul 02 December 2012

Dear Karoliena You are an inspiration to others. Your life's path I am sure will be helping others. Too share this.. you have so much strength. Thank you so much. Smile even though your heart is aching (Michael Jackson) , that song reminds me of you... Wow!

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Locura Alaam 29 November 2012

Another very well written poem of yours! Keep it up. It is sad to know that there are people who actually do such things...horrible actions that should never have taken form in existence... Nevertheless, as a poem, you have done a wonderful job...again!

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Shihabudheen K J 26 November 2012

so sad to know this............its indeed feeling hard to read this work...................

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