Friday, June 26, 2015

Secret Place Comments

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Having fun in a beach and resort
Going to different exotic place
Climbing high mountains for challenge
Riding in zip line to remove fear of heights
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Roseann Shawiak 26 June 2015

This poem totally suits my fancy, I love traveling and you have made it sound so enticing, mysterious and inviting! Your imagery is superb. Yet self awareness and self realization are the secret places where we can always exist when we close our eyes and discover who we are! I love the comparison and wording of this poem, Herbert! Very good. Just watch how you use some of the simple words. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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