Secret Of The Sun Comments

Excellent work, i love this poem! Keep up the good work,

Ur poem is really awesome.. I like it very much.. I can't say anything else because is really awesome.. I love ur writing..! :)

You tell your story well, from the heart of the matter. Keep feeding us your beautiful morsels as we are straving for information.

I like it.very much, actauly

Much better. You have caught the spirit.