Saturday, May 18, 2013

Secret Of Marriage Comments

Rating: 4.0

Though meeting is 'arranged'
It's better to become 'friends'
Before you take the holy vows
Two strange hearts should come close.
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Soumita Sarkar
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Wahab Abdul 20 May 2013

theme, you have taken from reality.. nice to read it too.. good poem..love it. carry on..

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Sawmitra Roy 18 May 2013

hmmm. i like that....arranged mosly goes with the indian subcontinent....i liked it...basic things brought up nicely and clearly in this one... p.s: use rhyming words carefully so that they rhyme properly....read my one Worl of My Own and give an honest review...thanks

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