Thursday, June 21, 2007

Secret Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Loneliness knocked on my door tonight once again
but when she came inside and saw you
she was jealous and left us alone.
Our night is here.
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Constantinos Grigoriadis
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Peter Stavropoulos 22 June 2007

Excellent poem. I enjoy reading your work. Light hearted and happy economy of language yet touching on deeper themes. In this one - hints of mythical beings combined with an acceptance that indicates that you may also like to be one of them. Well done!

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Nadia O.Z 21 June 2007

that is simply lovely

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